in some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities.
Industries and businesses are commonly situated in big cities, however, they are now requested by governments to relocate to suburb areas. Frankly speaking, I believe that the resulting in the enviroment and also people physical health is far more benefits than it drawbacks.
Admittedly, high-building and skyscraper where those companies occupied are the most popular attraction to the public eyes. These places intrigued millions of visitors to the cities, consequently, citizens can make profit and earn significant more to support their family. With the presence of these businesses, they offered employment prospects for many students looking for part-time job and also many graduates. Changing the location of these corporates will affected in an enormous number inhabitants becomes unemployed. For instance, in July of last year, a wood production company in Ho Chi Minh city were burned. The damaging effects caused the place to close down. As a result, 1500 employees were suffered from out of job and 50% of those were poor people that barely make end meet. Thus, it can be said that the income of people in cities depends on those industries and businesses, without them, citizens will have hard time earning money.
Nevertheless, I think that the relocation of these corporates will exert positive impacts upon the enviroment and also people's health. Many companies build their factories within the cities, the emissions they discharged caused severe damages to citizens health and on top of that is pollution. A recent research have shown that many big cities in China is heavily polluted due to the toxic gas that their factory released. Children and many aged populations are discovered to have breathing problems as consequence from inhaling the polluted air. By moving factories away from urban areas, physical health of citizens will improve significantly and the most important goal is to protect our enviroment.
In conclusion, I am inclined to believe that relocating industries create better influence that can outweighed their downside. Although, unemployment is a big problem to many governments, however, protecting our enviroment is extremely crucial to our health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
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Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...discovered to have breathing problems as consequence from inhaling the polluted a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, frankly, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43859649123 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87167849804 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587719298246 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2117674508 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.411764706 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0912718361486 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295515080155 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559497843292 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722224960741 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533948425511 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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