Telecommunication is one best way of communication on the modern world. It has drastically changed the communication style of the modern people. With rapid developmental of telecommunication, it has both positive and negative impact on communication and life style s. In this essay I will discuss the both negative and positive side of telecommunication and a reach conclusion.
On the one hand, varieties of telecommunication that made easier and faster to do the communication. People shouldn't be depend on letter as like as past to send and take the message. In addition, facebook, twitter, viver, imo etc those function made to much easier to do the communication. It also protects the time and money. People can do the face to face communication. Cell phone laptop and other gadgets have included all type of services for communication .
On the other hand, by this way of sharing information people misuse the spelling and grammatical structure. People has made the short word and sentence. In the cell phone and a laptop that have manage the easy and shortcut way to typing the words, so people will not care of the spelling and grammatical structure. For instance, people have habituated on this words or sentence such as how are u?hlo, gn, gm etc. Therefore that would be omitted the spelling and words on this type of communication.
To recapitulate, that have no doubt telecommunication made easier and comfortable to communication. It protects the time and cost of the people. However, it has done negative impact to the spelling and grammtical system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: shouldn't
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...o etc those function made to much easier to do the communication. It also protect...
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Suggestion: protects
...asier to do the communication. It also protect the time and money. People can do the f...
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...d all type of services for communication . On the other hand, by this way of sh...
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...cal structure. People has made the short word and sentence. In the cell phone and...
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...n the cell phone and a laptop that have manage the easy and short cut way to typing th...
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... a laptop that have manage the easy and short cut way to typing the words, so people will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10424710425 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37407449506 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501930501931 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.848530126 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5789473684 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6315789474 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191382088959 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565320774543 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364389403654 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104525452226 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468661626081 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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