Nowadays, it is possible to move sea creatures from their natural habitat at sea and have them relocated in amusement parks for the purpose of people’s recreation. Do you think advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?
Explain your reasons and support them with specific examples.
The movement of various aquatic animals from the ocean to aquariums has been a subject of controversy. Technological advancement has made it possible to move deep-sea animals from their natural abode to parks for amusement. This essay disagrees with the development and outlines why the drawbacks far outweighs the benefits.
Man is naturally inquisitive, as such he wants to know more about the environment and creatures that live far around him. Relocation of sea creatures allows them to be seen at close ranges which this gives insights into their life and gives a feeling beyond words. The Dubai aquarium is one of the largest fish tanks in the world and home to over two thousand species of aquatic animals that are viewed for pleasure by humans.This is a major tourist attraction that makes millions marvel at its view. Despite the attention to detail and the the care of the fishes, a good number don't get to full maturity before death.
On the contrary, the disadvantages of transferring sea animals from their natural setting disrupts their life. Most animals in artificial environment don't reproduce and is endangered. Statistics have revealed a sharp decline in the population of aquatic animals in recent years. Much of this has been attributed to the movement of sea animals from their abode to man made sites. I strongly believe that if this trend is not stopped, humans will hasten the extinction of sea creatures. while some opine that reproduction can be through artificial insemination or cloning, this however is a deviation from the original lifestyle of aquatic animals.
To sum up, the transfer of animals to tanks is harmful to their survival. this has led to a decline in their population and will ultimately affect ecology and the food chain. Steps must be taken to prevent the exploitation of sea creatures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05245901639 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79107881208 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580327868852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3922581226 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257163664278 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795113629278 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724377962437 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153875372265 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049058263499 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.