Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
<p style="white-space: normal;">Nowadays, more and more high-rise buildings have sprung up in central cities. High-rise living is assumed by some people to be bad since high-rise apartments cause people to feel lonely and unhappy. However, others believes high-rise buildings own many merits. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of such apartments.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">People who live in high-rise apartments tent to feel lonely. They find it difficult to maintain an enduring relationship with each other, because most of them only rent apartments and move around a lot. They hardly communicate with neighbors, so the sense of belongings is absent among these residents. When they encounter problems in life, they feel helpless and depressed. Moreover, high-rise apartments are normally in heavily populated urban areas and people may live in cramped conditions. For instance, there is no adequate space such as private backyards and playgrounds for holding parties. People are more likely to live a reclusive life. This is less likely to happen in low-density neighborhoods.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">On the positive side, living in high-rise apartments allow people to do some leisure activities with their friends because there are a lot of recreational facilities in the city center. For example, residents find it easier to go some gyms and clubs nearby with their friends. This can enrich their social life and give them a sense of happiness.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">In conclusion, high-rise apartments have some demerits such as lonely, cramped. However, it provides convenience lifestyle and high living standards, which I believe is much more important for most of people.</p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1765, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ch I believe is much more important for most of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94941634241 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.15184760973 2.80592935109 148% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618677042802 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3853273163 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.214285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368923946595 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133914275484 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121003009686 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.368923946595 0.151304729494 244% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.23 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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