Today, a majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working.
In today’s materialistic world, both mothers and fathers have to work fulltime in order to making life better for their children. However, grandparents are forced to look after their kids. I believe that this arrangement has more negative effects than positive ones. In this essay some psychological problems that could happen will be analyzed.
It is obvious to everyone kids are not like soft sands and they cannot take shape they are given. Growing up with someone else than own parents has numerous mental side effects which could not be cope with easily. Besides, children who has raised with their family elders will not get same kindness of their own mother’s and father’s. A good illustration for this is single-parent families that should work late till night and kids are deprived of their parent’s affection in European countries. So, this is why family elderlies cannot take parents place.
On the other hand, grandparents will not a good case as a kid’s playmate. For instance, children in the early ages prefer to empty their inner energy by running and play loudly which could irritate elderlies. Furthermore, when immature children are kept in touch with their grandparents, they will not learn much about the outdoor life and it will be difficult for them to be socialized due to unavailability of their grandparents to go out of home. Thus, kids cannot release their passive energy as like they do with their parents and this will heart them mentally and physically.
In conclusion, nowadays in order to meet the family needs, parents have been force to work during a day and let their child’s grow up by grandparents which I believe this behavior not only will hurt children psychologically but also will has long-term effects and will affect their behavior in the future career and personality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 244, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... children psychologically but also will has long-term effects and will affect their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12582781457 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84186993492 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569536423841 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9106246282 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287530832602 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102982262321 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757847198117 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186330079458 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350907926105 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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