People visiting other countries should adapt to the customs and behaviors expected there. They should not expect the host country to welcome different customs and behaviors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays it can be seen that people are immigrating to developed nations in search of better opportunities. Thus there is a never-ending expectation that people travelling to the host country should adapt to their customs and behaviours rather than expecting native people to welcome different traditions and behaviours. I will discuss this contentious argument and elucidate my opinion with relevant examples.
Firstly it is evident that the people who immigrate overseas permanently must accustom to the local customs and behaviour of that country in order to gel up with the community. In the longer run, it will make the transition to a new place much easier for that immigrant and hence it play a pivotal role in becoming successful at professional front. To elucidate many different ethnicities immigrate to Singapore thus they learn the local custom and behaviours to adapt.
Secondly, on the other hand, most of the developed countries welcome the immigrants or tourists because of their skill set and economic benefits they bring to the host country. To elucidate immigrants friendly nations like Singapore and the United Arab Emirates welcome only skilled manpower globally thus helping their economic progression. Similarly popular tourist destinations like Indonesia, Thailand are thriving because of the tourists who help the local tourism sector to flourish. These countries present an example of multicultural societies thriving together where people irrespective native or foreign are keen to learn customs and behaviour which helps in maintaining peace and harmony in the region.
To conclude in my opinion above arguments with examples elucidate that it is imperative for people irrespective of being a native or foreigner to adapt to custom and behaviour of the host country and vice-versa which plays a pivotal role in laying the strong foundation for a better future for that country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90807751397 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542087542088 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9702117863 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.272727273 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249563807354 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952985464428 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109443798375 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158237578771 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698293511299 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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