People visiting other countries should adapt to the customs and behaviors expected there. They should not expect the host country to welcome different customs and behaviors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People visiting other countries should adapt to the customs and behaviors expected there. They should not expect the host country to welcome different customs and behaviors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Tourists are expected to be adaptable to the customs and behaviors but also not to expect tolerance to their practices in foreign nations. While I completely agree with this notion due to several reasons, I believe that they must be accommodating to the expected behavior towards their own cultures.

In my opinion, firstly, due omnipresent information, locals now expect the tourists to have meager knowledge about etiquettes, since all the pre-requisites are now over government websites and blogs for the vacationers to review. Secondly, they also think that their culture is superior to others. For instance, in some Middle Eastern countries, it is forbidden to wear revealing clothes on beaches, if found guilty, they could be fined or tried in the court of law. In general, travellers must try to abide by local rules and regulations.

I also believe that they must be open to all kind of conduct by the residents since they are in a society alien to them. Locals at some destinations are used to dealing with all kinds of globe-trotters, so they might develop stereotypes. Because of this, they can either expect a friendly or a hostile behavior. In some places, the communities are open to immigrant’s cultures and participate in it, where either the economy relies on tourism or the communities are amicable. So, both welcoming and rude attitudes can be expected from the inhabitants.

In conclusion, while holidaymakers in host nations must try to learn the local conventions beforehand, they must adjust to behavior they might experience.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, kind of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20553359684 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06157547474 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588932806324 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3896223953 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166180792308 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665496340191 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633189806242 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108781525001 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613593838463 0.056905535591 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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