The graph below shows the music album sales from 2002 to 2012.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. write at least 150 words.
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of six different music albums. Rock, rhythm and blues, jazz, rap, country and other music sales in three different time periods 2002, 2007 and 2012.
Overall, rock music album was the most sold album in all three years, however, R and B music album was dropping down as the year goes by. Rap and jazz music remained steady in 2002, 2007 and in 2012. Other kinds of music and countryside music albums were slightly increasing.
In 2002, rock and R and B music albums were most recommended music with the percentage of 31% and 30%, although, R and B music reached a peak at 20% in 2007 and dipped down to 12% in 2012. Other pieces of music and country music albums were least sold in 2002 with 11% and 15% hence, both albums climbed up in the following years 14% to 15% in 2007 and 17% to 18% respectively in 2012. Rap and Jazz music albums remained constant in all years with 10% and 3% mere.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46242774566 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22287218416 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49710982659 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2467349686 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206464952721 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108574151891 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372863780553 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154271882919 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328951517711 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.46 61.2550243902 151% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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