You recently applied for 2 separate jobs. Both have chosen to hire you, but you must write a letter to 1 of them explaining why you are unable to take the position. Include in your letter:
· An apology
· An explanation of your situation
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to regrettably inform you that I would not be able to take up the position of Senior Sales Engineer with your prestigious organization.
First and foremost I would like to apologize for communicating my decision at a later stage and would to offer my sincere gratitude towards your hiring staff especially your human resources team for spending their precious time with me on the finalization of the offer.
Let me explain my situation while I had an offer from your side I received an alluring offer in tandem from another company. To elucidate, the role is for a Technical Presales Manager based in Singapore and offers better growth opportunities and exposure which will further strengthen my profile. As you are aware that nowadays you have to make a strenuous effort for getting an offer for overseas roles additionally I believe that it is a golden opportunity for me to experience a foreign work-culture.
I look forward to your acceptance and applogize for any inconvience caused.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in reference to...
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Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eer with your prestigious organization. First and foremost I would like to apolo...
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Line 4, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th me on the finalization of the offer. Let me explain my situation while I had ...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ny inconvience caused. Yours sincerely Ben
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05649717514 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98171301964 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683615819209 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3718822523 44.8134815571 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.857142857 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 16.8248392259 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276484271778 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117824707042 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648891900725 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144077255375 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577761420668 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 70.7449484536 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.