Some people believe it is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public. Others believe that the public has a right to be fully informed.
Being a public figure it's necessary for political leaders to disclose the information to public. As they have authority and access to many government properties, they are responsible to disclose their activities as well as their personal information.
Many political leaders tent to mislead or hide the their persona information like properties, relationships, criminal cases etc. I's not viable to hide these information from public, as being public figure as well as being leader, people who are voting them must know how liable their leader is and how credible he or she is. So that public can choose the best one, and refrain from electing a criminal. For example in India many politicians have been convicted for illegal assets which were kept hidden from public and when they came into power their properties rife. Once the public came to know abt those illegal properties, public has thrown out those corrupt politicians. So it is necessary for the politicians to disclose their information like properties, criminal cases and many other information which are important to disclose to pupils.
One another important reasoning because of which politicians should disclose their information is they have more power than public to influence others and access the public properties. So if it's withheld that what the leaders are doing there are possibilities of duplicity by the politicians. For example take an example where tender is to be given for the construction of a flyover and if public is being refrained from the actual tender amount and all the expenditure going to occurs during the construction there are chances that politicians can manipulate the tender process and give the tender to their close relatives are to the organization from which they can earn profit. So it's necessary to disclose the information regarding such deal, so that tax payers who are paying taxes can know that how their hard earned money is being used, and can raise raise concern if found any discrepancy.
Moreover, the main reason because of which politicians should disclose is their personal character and early life as if the politicians didn't disclose their personal character and early life there are chances that they may be a criminal and people are not knowing about them. As many cases came in India where politicians came out to be a criminal once they got elected, it was disclosed. So they should disclose these information.
However, this is not always the cases, politicians might hide the information which is either their personal information and it has nothing to do with public like how the relationship going on with his or her partner, what their kids are doing that too if it's not the matter of the society, and their personal security related information, they can hide or if the information is regarding security of nation or public they can hide the information as it might lead to discloser of information to enemy. So there must be some exceptions where politicians can hide the information.
By citing all the reasonings it's evident that politicians should not withhold the information from public as it's public right to know what their leaders are doing are how their character is. Politicians should not withhold the information until and unless it's not the matter of their personal security or nation security.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...litical leaders tent to mislead or hide the their persona information like properties, re...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...iminal cases etc. Is not viable to hide these information from public, as being public figure as ...
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Line 5, column 782, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much other information', 'a good deal of other information'.
Suggestion: much other information; a good deal of other information
...ion like properties, criminal cases and many other information which are important to disclose to pupi...
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Line 9, column 186, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...thers and access the public properties. So if its withheld that what the leaders are ...
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Line 9, column 480, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'occur'.
Suggestion: occur
...amount and all the expenditure going to occurs during the construction there are chanc...
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Line 9, column 853, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: raise
...ard earned money is being used, and can raise raise concern if found any discrepancy. ...
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Line 13, column 137, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...er and early life as if the politicians didnt disclose their personal character and e...
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Line 13, column 249, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... that they may be a criminal and people are not knowing about them. As many cases came in India...
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Line 13, column 414, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
... was disclosed. So they should disclose these information. However, this is not always the...
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Line 21, column 257, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...thhold the information until and unless its not the matter of their personal securi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 19.5258426966 195% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2821.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 549.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13843351548 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7697426262 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.380692167577 0.4932671777 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 883.8 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.982297986 60.3974514979 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.473684211 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8947368421 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23538682917 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995537595283 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832292462522 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152102962245 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689853357606 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.