You work a part-time job in a company and the company posted an advert seeking a person for a full-time position. Write a letter to your manager requesting to apply for the advertised position. In your letter say
– Why do you want to apply?
– What are your future goals?
– Why would it be beneficial for the company?
Dear mr. Collins,
Having seen your advertisement on the Head Hunter website , I would like to apply for the full-time position of an economist.
I have been working as an accountant for our company for the last 2 years. Currently I do part-time job because I am on maternity leave. However, next week my child will start attending kindergarten, so I will be able to work 8 hours a day. That’s why I would like to apply for this vacancy.
I have 3 years of working experience as a financial analyst and, in the coming years, I plan to continue working in this field. I would be happy to have an opportunity to proceed with my employment in the company in a new position, so I would be able contribute all my knowledge and experience to the full extend.
I’m completely qualified for the job: I have a Bachelor degree in Economics and relevant working experience as I mentioned above. I am familiar with the tasks mentioned in the vacancy, therefore I am ready to perform the duties right from the start, no instructions needed. Moreover, having the experience as an accountant, I can mentor a new employee who would take up my position if I acquire the appointment of an economist.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Joanna Smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...advertisement on the Head Hunter website , I would like to apply for the full-time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74107142857 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95090360716 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584821428571 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.656351964 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246258236178 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855706799669 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071783143553 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137070874281 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084710330356 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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