People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
Many cities are facing a major threat due increased population and lack of resources for living in everyday life. Governments should promote occupation of smaller towns thus would help in reducing the issues faced by balance the Environment. This essay will discuss on problems faced by cities and also how urban areas can help to eradicate threats.
Nowadays, Increased population in cities has created several issues like Pollution, Water shortages etc. In cities small families tend to buy cars for daily routine and is not used in an efficient manner thus wasting fuel and pollute the air. Increased population has also caused water shortages in cities. For Example, daily office commuters use cars for 1 person to travel to workplaces. Increased use of cars has also created congested roads and makes it difficult to travel. Pollution is one of the major reasons for global warming. People should encourage public transports which would benefit for better roads and less pollution.
On the other hand, regional towns can be developed to encourage relocation which would help to maintain a balance and reduce major problems. Migrating to smaller towns can result in even distribution of man power and also would encourage creating industries and other public services. For example, implementing small hospitals with better medical facilities in urban areas could serve better for those who have to reach out to major towns. A recent survey has stated that developing urban areas has increased its revenues by 30 % and also reduces the burden on high tax payers.
On a whole, it is advisable that governments should encourage migration to smaller towns which could result in lesser issues faced by the people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient manner" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... cars for daily routine and is not used in an efficient manner thus wasting fuel and pollute the air. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19855595668 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5766345488 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559566787004 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.716437651 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196101256176 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649884129298 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692840713577 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14238755737 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880855750147 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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