In school children should have a history subject included. To what extent do you agree?
Todays mordern era of hightechnologly there are many children who dont know about the local history of the world these is because of school doesnt give importance to history as compared to science. In my view i believe that local subject history should be given much importance and should be manditory for institutes to teach to pupil to learn that what had happen in past going to be intresting and that can help student to became and archeologist into his future carrer the learning of history has a flip side like a coin it can help for the invention that happen in history and other can do some research on it. having the idea of past can be benefical for the traditional knowlege from it. In addition to we can also say that by studing of history can have carrer in life and in field of history there are more and more detail into it for example if we go on historic place to visit we will wish to have a knowledge that what has happen over here the bettle was there over here or not the war of panipat in country india. Moreover the india cinema and the serials are made on the history of the king and queen that explore the knowledge by playing role and its easy to understand by the people in their life and todays generation are visulizing the historical things. In the conclusion we can say by visulizing the essay that history should be neccessary of school to teach history to the childrens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42084942085 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42503625187 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521235521236 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.718496038 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.833333333 106.682146367 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.1666666667 20.7667163134 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221811541225 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107607210854 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528697985168 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221811541225 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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