The government should lower the budget on the arts in order to allocate more money to education. To what extent do you agree?
Talking about how to suitable allocate resources to two fields between the art fields and education system. Some researchers consider that the national and local authorities should invest in education organization rather than supporting money on the arts. In my opinion, I total agree with this ideal.
Nowadays, education system plays important rules for many generations especially young people because it brings more benefits in many different aspects. Firstly, rather than supporting financial aid for the arts, the authorities should encourage residents, as well as their children learning more and more by providing highly facilities for schools such as the authorities, build more schools curriculum, classroom which have fully equipped with modern facilities, it can raise people’s awareness of people by the ways they will accumulate knowledge and apply the knowledge in their life and looking more opportunities. Thanks to, the economic system will grow up as well as in developing countries more than.
Another point the authorities should assist financial aid for poverty-stricken families as to encourage their children going to school by the national and local authorities to prioritize expenditure on these families like scholarships, free school fees, or maybe something like that as presents for them. Besides, the government should run several campaigns for their mental life especially children by the ways of creating many activities like cycling, walking in the park.
In conclusion, education organization is one of the comprehension fields including the arts so that I think that the authorities should invest more than in this field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ople because it brings more benefits in many different aspects. Firstly, rather than supportin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, well, as to, i think, in conclusion, such as, talking about, as well as, by the way, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61904761905 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99674384473 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579365079365 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.996458155 49.4020404114 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.333333333 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.7777777778 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13520125181 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586296262843 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242104107537 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087025397438 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262137012777 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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