Do you think mass media including television, radio and newspaper have great influence in shaping people ideas.
Nowadays the issue of mass media was in debatable. Some masses assert that the mass media changes day by day which is not good for people . Whilst, others think that it is good for people to communicate with the help of mass media. I will shed light on both views with suitable example before proper conclusion.
To begin with, mass media is not good because nowadays there are numerous method to communicate with other people. But for some people the old method was good because in earlier time individuals listen news in radio. For example when any person need help they write letter to other person which live far away from them but nowadays technology were increases the method was also changes. ¬¬
Nevertheless, mass media is very helpful for people to know about everything about the world because with the help of television people listen news which is taught about everything. Moreover, main aspect of mass media is internet. Like there are many social media app the most popular are instagram, Facebook and whatsapp this app help to gain many information and also good for to relax the mind.
To sum up with, mass media is increasing day by day and helps to gain more knowledge and with the help of technology mass media increasing more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... day by day which is not good for people . Whilst, others think that it is good fo...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...book and whatsapp this app help to gain many information and also good for to relax ...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...book and whatsapp this app help to gain many information and also good for to relax the mind. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77880184332 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32056145597 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529953917051 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7092861788 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2727272727 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168410436424 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086896850393 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572181236791 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118471815784 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463196150272 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 55.0591133005 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.