Fast food has become a part of our society. What is the impact of fast food on human life?
Now in the modern era, the fast become more popular in every country and it also a very delicious food. Most of the people love to eat the fast food.There are lots of impact of fast which is not good for human beings. I will elaborate this topic with suitable example before appropriate conclusion. To begin with, the fast are many types and it make mostly in all countries and many people love the fast food. The fast food was made from the different things like pizza, burger and dosa etcetera. Furthermore, all kind of fast food are very spicy. It is a part of our society because almost every people love them. Moreover, mostly the fast are not good for human beings because these are very oily and this is not good for health and cause many health disease. Many individuals are addicted to eat fast food daily. Mostly those person who eat this in daily the are fatty and also effect on growth properly. Mainly, people was want to eat fast food in evening time. To sum up with, i opine that eat fast food but in limit because when the person do anything out of limit then they suffer from consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, kind of, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42647058824 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13272478164 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9120616517 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3927573035 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161149876688 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973210421078 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3927573035 0.151304729494 260% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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