It is often argued that hard earned money should spent on our enjoyment without considering our future, while others believes that for betterment of life after job, one must save some of their partial income. To a large extent, I agree on the notion that portion of our earnings must be saved to live a happy life.
Maintaining our finance effectively and spending money accountably are the key factors for one's development in the life. Saving money form the young age is a good practice because we can depend on us in a surge time. This, in turn, encourage us to do challenging task, where money involves. Moreover, after we become a parents, it is necessary to think about our children's future. Their educational expenditure would be five times more than current market, so it is very much needed for the planned savings. Now a days, so many insurance companies offering variety of insurance scheme for the children's empowerment.
In addition to that, in this globalized world, it is difficult to predict whether our children would take care of us in our older age. So better have a savings to lead a happy life after the retirement without any hassles. Further, keeping money in hand would help the needy people in the right time, they may be our family members or friends. Although it is important to separate some portion of money, we should not forget to enjoy our day to day life as well. Because, our body and mind gets tired, if we are not taking care of it. By doing work continuously without entertain ourself would affect our mental health.
To conclude, we are enjoing our life without any problems because of our parent's savings and insight for our future they had. Saving is a good habit, which would brings us a good fortune, so always so that and educate others.
- Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitor are unaware that this is happening.Do you think the advantag 78
- Leaving Country amp Living Abroad 72
- Some people think that it is necessary to save money for life after retirement. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student.However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find itvery difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,• describe the situ 73
- On recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter •Describe the item you lost•Explain what the problem is•Te 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ney accountably are the key factors for ones development in the life. Saving money f...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a parent' or simply 'parents'?
Suggestion: a parent; parents
...ney involves. Moreover, after we become a parents, it is necessary to think about our chi...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...ry much needed for the planned savings. Now a days, so many insurance companies offering v...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...uch needed for the planned savings. Now a days, so many insurance companies offering v...
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Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun insurance seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much insurance', 'a good deal of insurance'.
Suggestion: much insurance; a good deal of insurance
...for the planned savings. Now a days, so many insurance companies offering variety of insurance...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
...ad. Saving is a good habit, which would brings us a good fortune, so always so that an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71565495208 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4937038581 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597444089457 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4651965471 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9375 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226488055514 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774364931643 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508164606573 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147346554425 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508026893465 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.