Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
there is an irrefutable fact that children are learning in cultural subjects more than activities. they have lost free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons are necessary for school. I agree to this, in the essay I will give my opinion.
The important strong point of sports subjects in the school is improving the health of the student. they will have a robust constitution, this activity makes students feel comfortable for the next lesson. Moreover, the government will have to spend less money on medical care in the future. Secondly, these lessons can increase their teamwork, they are helped by the people around to complete the exercises. next, leader skill still helps them more much and the participating in the school will make them proud to study here.
Some people believe will have a few drawbacks, there are still conflicting ideas for this. they think they will lose an extra cost to make uniform or other expenses or maybe children can not like this subject. but my own feeling on the opinions of parents are, children learn too many cultural subjects at the same time that the amount of knowledge they bring is overwhelming. As an effect, this person can be stressful and lose many times to relax play another sport they like. To give you an example of what I mean, one day normal of the student in junior high school and high school, they must study eight hours for all day or add two hours on a night, so we have a half time of day for the study in my country. that really affects the spirit of the child if that continues.
In conclusion, I totally agree to include more sports lessons in school. children who are intellectually, but need to have strong physical strength. Not only help for now but also these subjects will help them in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, as for, i mean, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73650793651 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44719696606 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1937722555 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8888888889 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178200775583 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612501209157 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529813281846 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128130181859 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638923188557 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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