Online education and training is becoming increasingly popular in the business world.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In this fast-paced world, modern pedagogies has impacted every student around the world. This shift is believed as the major educational transformation not only for the students but for the faculties also. There are more advantages than disadvantages which I described in this essay.
First of all, time and place is not a serious matter nowadays as online education provides flexibilities in this case. Secondly, students can watch any videos over and over unless and until they get fully understandability of the topic. Moreover, it only attracts the real learners and therefore decorum for the study could be maintained, even in the live sessions. Last but not least, online education is way more cost effective than the traditional one because it can serve as many people as they want at a single time. For example, Udemy is the online portal where students or professionals can purchase any certified course. In fact, some courses are tailored as per the affiliated universities requirement. Some hands-on videos created by industries experts are available at only 1000 Rupees. Here, good thing is subscriber can watch this videos until they inherit required knowledge.
However, I can not completely neglect the dark side of the new emerging way of study and forgo the advantages of traditional teaching methods. Offline education provides live feedback and proactive approaches to convey proper message. It also helps every student to overcome their doubt in different ways. Additionally, tutor also quit acquitted with the audience he or she serves, therefore they can start their lectures according to the cognitive level of respective students. For example, primary schools still not adapted the modern way of learning because they know that students below 12 years need proactive attention and teacher also set their teaching parameters which resonate with the students.
To deduce, after discussing both the advantages and disadvantages I can say that advantages clearly overtake disadvantages. If this evolvement continues then it would be possible that primary schools would welcome said way of education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... for the students but for the faculties also. There are more advantages than disadva...
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Line 3, column 840, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ere, good thing is subscriber can watch this videos until they inherit required know...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...antages clearly overtake disadvantages. If this evolvement continues then it would...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41265060241 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88845684975 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6594962038 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146052833855 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490330026012 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530932733367 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104640802692 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633214682806 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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