The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world.
The bar chart illustrates information about the percentage of how many people live in the city from six continents across the world. From an overall perspective, the population in Asia and Africa is projected to have significant growth in the future.
Noticeably, in the period of 1950, Asia and Africa were considered as the regions that have the lowest number of residents in urban areas with merely 15-17 per cent while the population of city-people in North America gained the highest percentage at 64 per cent which was over 50 per cent of its citizens, following by Oceania, Europe and Latin America/Caribbean. During 2007, the amount of dwellers living in the city in each continent had increased though the residents in Asia's and Africa's urban areas were still under half of their population compared to other four regions. The increase of people in the city of Latin America rose by more than 30 per cent meanwhile Oceania, North America, and Europe had a range of urbanised dwellers between 9 and 12 per cent.
To estimate the growth of city-people in 2050, Oceania is predicted to have a slight change in residents who live in the city at only 14 per cent increase. Even though most of population in North America, Latin America, and Europe will have become more urbanised in 2050, the rise in people in Asia's and Africa's urban areas shows considerable changes with approximately 47-49 per cent increase.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.925 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74255304821 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.6769868475 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.857142857 112.824112599 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2857142857 22.9334400587 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159917762568 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928650003876 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948162813702 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137000244921 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804543769834 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.2329268293 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 61.2550243902 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.