Some people say parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own.
There is no doubt that, children nowadays always get involved in some activity or the other during their free time. While some parents believe it is necessary for them to get involved with organized group activities, others also believe children should develop their own schedule to occupy themselves. In my opinion, I would support the latter view and will further discuss in this essay with examples.
On the one hand, those who believe that young people should get involved with social groups may someday become more dependent on other people. This is because group activities always require a partner in order to achieve a task. For example, to play tennis, which is a very common sport, will always need an opposite player to play with.
On the other hand, I would strongly believe occupying their free time by themselves, would bring in the innovation or hidden talent in them. As a consequence, children may try out new activities which they are most interested in. For instance, they can try playing a musical instrument by themselves
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 175.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00571428571 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48944875465 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662857142857 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7861831647 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304071777026 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115955348239 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104088042673 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201194022094 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099718944193 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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