In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
Urbanization is a contentious issue. While some people think that developing the rural area is the only choice for establishing new residential area, I believe that it is better to leave the countryside intact.
Building a new residential area in the suburbs causes egregious consequence on the food supply for the city. Developing the rural area means dwindling of the land used for an agricultural purpose where crops and farm animals are produced and raised. Farmers and animals need to relocate to new farmland. Some farmers may find themselves hard to adapt to the soil conditions and weather in the new place and as a result of poor harvest. To illustrate, in 2014 the Daily Mail reported that in Australia, the use of farmland for building purpose caused wheat price to skyrocket as the production halved. This forced Australia to import wheat at a higher price in order to satisfy the needs of the public.
Apart from causing food shortage, expending residence to countryside leads to environmental problems. To begin with, inevitably, a huge area of forest will be destroyed. Trees act as natural barriers, if it is cut down, the city, in the short term, will lose the protection from frigid winter winds. In the medium term, topsoil is not held by roots of trees and causing topsoil erosion, and finally, major floods. In fact, there have been more and more reports on serious flooding every year in the news due to urbanization. In the long run, there will be fewer clouds and rainfalls will become a rarity as the amount of water in soil absorbed and released by evapotranspiration by trees is reduced. For this reason, there will be a widespread of drought.
In sum, the conservation of the countryside is vital for human survival. Building new homes in rural areas cause detrimental effects on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, so, while, apart from, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92207792208 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81821922292 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3930438968 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1764705882 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225985165236 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642954806808 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677689722305 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153515200688 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696704140029 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.