From the past, several educational institutions follow firm rules regarding their pupils’ appearance, whereas limited organizations turn a blind eye. Despite the fact that these strict rules help in building discipline among their pupils, it also interferes with the creativity. In this essay, I will analyze the merits and demerits before providing my conclusion.
With regards to benefits, it is a proven fact that a strict dress code reduces on-campus bullying among the students. Although clothes are considered to be a status symbol, that should not trigger the gap between the rich and the poor. Thus, school uniforms put every student on the same line preventing bullying of this type. Furthermore, it develops a sense of unity and togetherness among students. Similarly, it helps you to get ready in much less time when you already know what to wear.
Alternatively, there are drawbacks too. For example, consider my cousin from fifth grade says that her school is very strict and gets severe punishment if she does not wear a uniform properly. This act engulfs students from expressing their personalities and stop them from being creative. Every student aspires to some dream when they become an adult such as becoming a doctor, lawyer and so on. They tend to show their interests in their personal belongings and attire. Furthermore, uniforms sold by the organization are overpriced than in stores. I personally experienced this at my school.
Taking everything into consideration, I pen down to say that, training discipline and making them feel united at the budding stage can be an asset for their life. Although there are some negative effects like overselling, teachers considering the student’s interest into account and support them accomplish their goals will help the buds stand in the limelight.
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- Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views. 78
- Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes for this?What possible solutions can you suggest? 78
- Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 84
- Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree? 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'belongings'.
Suggestion: belongings
...y tend to show their interests in their personal belongings and attire. Furthermore, uniforms sold ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, regarding, similarly, so, thus, whereas, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29452054795 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87540740136 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671232876712 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0710389501 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9411764706 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197821068324 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555224300111 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563273630412 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10391839278 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599082825345 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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