Dear Mr. Adam,
My name is Sara, I am regular customer in your shop. I am writing this letter just because of I have complained with you and your staff.
In couple of day ago, I remember that it was 25-06-2018, I purchased Panasonic LCD in your shop the size of LCD was 45 inches. After that when I reached home the switch button of screen was not working. I was continuously trying but unfortunately it was not responding.
Furthermore, the LCD wire is also loose. It is not connecting in any switch board. It is one of the basic issue.
Requested to you, kindly exchange it as soon as possible. In case, if the Panasonic LCD can not repairable so, refund my money with postive manner.
Your market value or good will is very reputated in our town. I hope you will resolve my issue on urgent basis.
Waiting for your postive response.
Yours sincerely,
Sara.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because I' instead.
Suggestion: because I
...our shop. I am writing this letter just because of I have complained with you and your staff...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...our shop the size of LCD was 45 inches. After that when I reached home the switch but...
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Line 15, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur postive response. Yours sincerely, Sara.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62420382166 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59905393211 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662420382166 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6067353756 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.8571428571 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.2142857143 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0906726884462 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310698405743 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441591790405 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474836242719 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466583751123 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.33 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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