Is it good for families if parents need to travel a lot in their job or if they need to move to other cities? Is moving to a new location positive for children?
Travelling because of person’s job may impact on family conditions which will generate many issues for each family member. It causes nomad workers prefer to encourage the quick adaptations at new environment. Besides, it will lead children to learn new things which are favorable and usable for them.
Vacation benefits families to enjoy their life when parents need to traverse the job to other places. That is impacting on experiences then the members may also tell some stories depend on nomad residence. For example, when parents have worked as international journalist such National Geographic, they must do travelling in every place using RV or rent a home to live in several time where there are also influencing family’s social skill. Scarcely are families having lots of problems when they find new things in around their place-living environments.
This trend could bring positive value for children’s growth because they can learn about new knowledge and experience. Moreover, those will establish well attitude being humble while children have interacted to their friends then interaction will encourage children becoming expert in social relation and produce great values in environment. Based on society, children can share their experience when they meet new friends as well. If they have those, they may impact the great tolerance and being a cool friend at school and neighborhood.
In conclusion, travelling is changing family views and become tolerance to their environment then it invents as well as gives more experiences to their children which add new knowledge in every place.
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- Is it good for families if parents need to travel a lot in their job or if they need to move to other cities? Is moving to a new location positive for children? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'several times'.
Suggestion: several times
...lace using RV or rent a home to live in several time where there are also influencing family...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46428571429 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83439744812 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615079365079 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2373722114 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309355498605 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113568571562 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064102321816 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179833057997 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375820180177 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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