You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• describe the problems
• what you would like him/her to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express the inconvenience faced by me and my family. My name is Abhishek Saxena, and I am the new tenant of your apartment no. 4520 in Tower B of the Race Course society.
Let me explain to you the situation, there are two main problems which require a fix or replacement. Firstly, the main inlet water pipe has a leak, which causes the loss of water and as a result, it is adversely affecting the water bill. Secondly, a couple of modular cabinets in the kitchen are damaged consequently, insects breed there and broken hinges creak.
I shall be grateful to you if you can address these issues. The contract restricts me to carry out such repair work, therefore, I need your assistance in arranging a plumber and a carpenter.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Abhishek Saxena
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| 2019-03-31 | Vaman Randhawa | 62 | view |
| 2019-02-08 | abhisheksaxena | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 715.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79865771812 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79312378371 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691275167785 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8555147898 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198140327895 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734365452519 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588568827884 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114843467135 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407021880299 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.