It is true that people usually struggle to become adjusted to new conditions. There could be several reasons for that, this essay will discuss the factors and offer solutions to deal better with this situation.
There are two main causes which make accepting a new change difficult. First, people have grown up in different parenting style which means every person has brought up with various attitudes. For example, some families have a very warm atmosphere inside the house and an intimate relationship together which builds a strong bond, particularly between children and parents. Consequently, this phenomenon may lead a person to an emotional attachment and of course an unwillingness for new changes that might affect their relationship. More specifically, people with this kind of manner will find themselves desperate in the different stages of life like living abroad for study or military service. Second, society plays a major role that influences people's approach towards new alterations and how they would react to unprecedented situations. For instance, the way people behave to a new cultural shift in using public transport like buses priority seat.
To ease the progress of adaptation in both cases of parenting style and society, some essential measures must be taken. Parents should consider circumstances in which children find themselves far away from their home and family, so that prepare them for this sort of conditions in life. Furthermore, society could have a great impact on people's approach by working on culturalization which improve the adaptability and acceptability of new changes in every aspect of social life.
So in conclusion, I personally believe that the more we consider a new situation as an opportunity, the easier it would be to adapt.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, of course, sort of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32862190813 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93138027187 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636042402827 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4636241669 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182121128543 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666386294365 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317317711847 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113287229044 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151493984354 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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