Adult youths are often called up for working for the development of communities. Do you think they should work voluntarily or should they get paid
The development of communities required vibrant energy of young blood. there are many volunteer programs, in most communities, where the young utilize their vigour for the good of men, but to ascertain the involvement of the young adult in community development, i believe monetary incentives should be there.
It is true that one should not wait for material advantages before contributing to society welfare. The drive for helping others should be an integral part of one's moral integrity. but to often the modern man is compelled to shun that what is moral and embrace what is materially beneficial to himself. Aside from the weakness of character shown in such cases, often his morality succumbs to the rising needs for sustaining independently. ages ago the youth was spared from such desperation, by the cooperative structure of then. but now every adult is now on his own. so to neutralize the economic pressure blocking the adult from participating in community development, hence these communities should arrange some monetary incentives so they can sustain themselves and the community.
A more perspective may tell us that today's age is really not so much compatible with volunteering. In many developed countries, even the police force is run profitably and CSR of profit motivated enterprises has started replacing non profit philanthrophy. Therefore to expect the young adults to volunteer for community development is only cacophony amidst the modern melody of social building and maintenance.
In the end, though, a conclusion to this argument relies on circumstantial judgement, and balancing of individual and social interests. While money will motivate a permanent source of energy for development of socities, youth should not wait for a cost benefit analysis before saving communities in a dire straits
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, may, really, so, then, therefore, while, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37282229965 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07448201026 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616724738676 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9767996269 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.142857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234938190221 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701412866466 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546519044841 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12976604254 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421622462787 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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