Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Youth have an enormous leverage on our society. They influence in a direct and in an intangible ways. It is utterly to appreciate their efforts in enhancing their community because of their indelible impact on the world. Although some people hold the view of point that young people today are not effective and play an influential impress in their society. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. In my perception which has led me to agree with the idea that teenagers have a pivotal role on their motherland and give much from their time to build and improve their community. In the following essay I shall delve into the most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, adolescent in the present are involved in many society activities like volunteer besides, work experiences to participat in the progress of the community. Furthermore, they use their spare time to explain in many free community activities the importance of building the society by young people efforts. For instance, 69% of people who volunteer at red cross are from juvenile age people. Those participate in many disaster programs to help people who their houses, cars, and living community effected. Furthermore, they supply foods to many shelters. Indeed, we should never forgot their roles in advent of modern technology which in turn helps to advancement of their counties. Apparently, it must be taken in account that Without their hard works and volunteer participation which cut from their own spare time to build and meet an intricate society.
In addition, most young people are keen to get their higher degree and achieve high grades in their universities. Their eager to learn is surely an ultimate evidence for their willing to help in nourishment of their native land. For instance, the last statistics result show an increase in the young people who attend collages in 18% than previous year, Besides, a myriad of them are looking forward to finish their master and pf degree. in view of the fact that these increasingly number of adolescent who seek for higher education will have its positive effect on their countries from al aspects.
To sum up, after contemplating the reasons which I mention before, taking all factors into considerations, I reinforce my idea that youth have an influential and enormous effect on their society and use many of their time and efforts as volunteer and works besides their education to helps in building their countries. Accordingly, I believe that the responsible people and leaders should put their vision, mission, and thinking to help those young people to make their roles in their own community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, besides, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2231.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09360730594 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70509409043 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522831050228 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4755661653 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.55 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20900139658 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699573182337 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469427003815 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14770723986 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264073482227 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.