It is really important to have highly occupied hobby to alleviate stress in day-to-day life.Everyone has the feeling of stress in their life and its also unavoidable. There are different ways to overcome or deal with stress. there are many activities that help counter that stress. One of those activities would be to involve ourself in stress relieving hobby.If everyone incorporates some leisure activity as part of their weekly schedule, it would make changes in their mental and physical health
Firstly, most important recreation and higly involved activity is Gardening. It not only helps us to get the benefits as fruits or vegetables. It brings us happiness and satisfaction as we involve ourself fully in bringing up the plant. It is certainly not a tiresome activity but makes feel relaxed and engage ourself in nature and peaceful atmosphere.Most importanly, it lowers the stress hormone cortisol and improves positive mood. Its part of natural healing phenomenon bringing ourself closer to earth. Flowers bring us happiness as we see them grow bigger.
Secondly, cooking new variety dishes makes us to taste different region healthy recipes. Cooking can be treated as a pastime or day to day chores.Baking new recipes for Children seeing websites improves confidence in ourself. It alleviates stress and brings most of family together as favorite timepass.Baking is also meditative and as we involve preparing difficult recipes we are more involved and our attention is deviated. Hence our stress is reduced.
Last but not least, difficult hobbies are certainly enjoyable if we think them as amusement or relaxation. It gets boring if we do difficult job without knowing purpose of activity. activities such as gardening, cooking not only relaxes us from stress but also makes us to meditate on particular topic and bring more attention to it. This deviates ourself from the revolving stress in our thoughts or mind. Hobbies are certainly required and if we pickup the most difficult ones we earn not only the benefits but also the stress releiving natural process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26047904192 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83999830566 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544910179641 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6059909069 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6111111111 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0691695467986 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021754602076 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304803882277 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.045249728054 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286983769748 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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