Reading fiction is more pleasurable than watching movies. Do you agree?
It it generally believed that reading and books are more beneficial than watching movies. I cannot agree more with this statement, considering all benefits provided by reading books.
First of all, books represent the roots of our society and education. Literature is not just a way to relax and to enjoy a perfect day, but to achieve knowledge and to develop as a person. Through books, we can improve our vocabulary, our spontaneous thinking and our arguments. Reading is much more important when it comes to children, because childhood is the time when we start to create our own mindset and a good influence in this period can create a good person later. Moreover, reading improves a plethora of skills, such as writing, reading and even thinking and speaking more coherently, things that are imperative for a successful career.
Secondly, there are no limits of imagination when you read a book. Movies are made to show everything, while books let you portray the characters and the place. In this way, you are more involved in the action and everything is happening in your own mind, not in front of your eyes. Thus, reading is more pleasurable because it makes you feel like you are part of the action, while in a movie you are just a part of the audience. It is obvious that movies have their advantages, for example they take less time, because the action is hurried, but the benefits of reading tip the balance in its favor.
To conclude, I support the fact that reading is a more enjoyable activity and a perfect way to improve your skills, even though I do not deny the advantages of watching a movie instead of reading a book.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70486111111 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61289970878 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524305555556 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6920486913 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.230769231 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326587540881 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110878536121 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103150062793 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208533927986 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957533254065 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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