Modern life has changed the old mindset of many people of getting up early. Do you prefer to be one of them or you believe in rising early?
In the modern society, there are many people who think that getting up early is just an useless obligation, just a predominant factor of the old mindset. In my opinion, an early start is beneficial for a productive day and has a plethora of advantages.
Firstly, it is scientifically proven that getting up early makes us more responsible and organized. It is important to plan our activities and set our goals, and, in this way, rising early offer us much more time for our plans. Mornings ensure us a fresh start and more time to decide what are we going to do, so we can afford to have moments to relax. From my personal experience, a hurried morning routine does not allow me to relax the rest of the day, and relaxation is important for our mind and health.
Secondly, getting up early is important for our health. The majority of people who are getting up late admit that this thing happens because they stay awake until morning, which is terrible for our organism. It is necessary to sleep eight hours per night, because the lack of sleep is the cause for many disease. For instance, we can become more anxious during the day or we can deal with a rising level of stress if we do not get enough sleep. Moreover, early mornings provide us silence, so we can start our day with a walk in the park and we can relax, hearing the chirping of the birds.
To conclude, early mornings are proven to be beneficial for a good developement. Also, it is important to find a balance between the ideas of the modern society and the old mindset of people, even though we talk about little things such us getting up early.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...who think that getting up early is just an useless obligation, just a predominant ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...day and has a plethora of advantages. Firstly, it is scientifically proven tha...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is important for our mind and health. Secondly, getting up early is important ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disease seems to be countable; consider using: 'many diseases'.
Suggestion: many diseases
...ause the lack of sleep is the cause for many disease. For instance, we can become more anxio...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ax, hearing the chirping of the birds. To conclude, early mornings are proven t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4813559322 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48473420119 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532203389831 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9532571951 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.692307692 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18425304911 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772269000261 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639905887845 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137698669576 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532523983277 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.