In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last 100 years, medicine, science or technology?
Technology is rapidly developing in various science fields, and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. While some people think that every fields equally contributes to the society, others maintain that some fields are more sophisticated and important than others. I am inclined to believe that new inventions in the field of medical science and engineering are prominent, and I will discuss the controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
To begin with, the traditional ways of living have been changed due to advent of multifarious technology. In the current era, people can travel faster from one country to another by using airplanes, and communicate with each other using cellphones. These inventions and advancements are crucial from future perspective, and to make human life better and comfortable. From my own experience, When I was studying at university, I used computer to solve complex mathematics problems in a very short period of time. Thus, computer is the greatest think that human have ever invented.
From a social standpoint, it is hard to compare different inventions of humans, because different inventions are made to solve distinguish problems that are already existed. For instance, a scientific research conducted by prestigious university has asserted that computer helped humans to solve complex tasks quickly, while antibiotics saved people lives. Therefore, team concluded that due to disproportionate there is no precise comparison.
In a nutshell, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that different fields have different purposes and goals. Inventions are composed of various fields, and intelligent people have to consolidate those fields to make a stable product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59851301115 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06556464605 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620817843866 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6708956607 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.846153846 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132856607717 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465777806151 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345470186583 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757916564273 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193364664355 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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