These days there is an ongoing debate between people about more information available online so library book are useless or not. While it is possible to claim that information plays vital role in human life. I agree with statement and get information from online rather than from library book has advantages outweigh the disadvantages. I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of argument.
There are several reasons why getting information from online has advantages over from library books, one of them is that access from anywhere at anytime. It can also be argued with that maintenance of the information is easy. I should also be taken into the account that search on some topic on online will list the relevant information too.
Those who argue for libary books are necessary to known information have different view and say that it can be actually a good thing. Firstly it is claimed that environment of library will helps the reader to concentrate on reading without distraction. Then are concerns about some people won't have accessbility to the internet will depend on library books.
While there is on strong arguments on both sides of case, my opinion is that getting information from online is very convenient way.I wolud strongly recommend that people wants to collect information from anywhere then they can go with online.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: help
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05777777778 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.652458445 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595555555556 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2896022096 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.454545455 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343662805743 0.242375264174 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121805853927 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118509131667 0.071462118173 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200539819022 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14359090092 0.0609392437508 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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