AS people rely more and more on technology to solve problems.the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
The statement contends that the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate, due to people rely more and more on technology to solve the problem.
the technology saves the humans time and increase the speed of doing work.Also it brings flexibilty for the people to operate the system.I disagree with the statement.
Today the use of technology is increasing day by day to enjoy fexible life.For that humans are using there ability to think to build new and advanced techology.
For example first the payment of money with credit card or cash transaction, there was a threat of cheating,fraud,fake signatures,excetra.But now people rely or trust the new techology
for payment is the online payment which provide saftey and security to the users.The online payment also saves time like to make payment of bills,order something online
like cloths,food,electronics items excetra. are done online by the apps used are like paytm,google pay,phonepe excetra.
First,In industries the workers have to do the work manualy but nowadays these work is been done on the tip of fingers.For example,In car manufacturing industries the workers have
to manully joins the components of the car and it have problems of manual work,speed decreases,waste of time increase and today all these work are done by machines which solve the problems of
time,manual works and human skills also increases.The productivty of the industries increase to advanced in new technology.
In addition,the skills of humans increses because for solving more and more problems humans will use there ability to solve these problems.The people will try to make new technolgy
which increase felexiblity for people.For example,Alex which make use Artificial Intelligance to perform various tasks like play music,radio,book tickets,alarm etcetra.These reduce the time,
also provide gadgets to use on a tip of finger.
However,due to rely on more and more on technology the people become lazy because for doing small works they use technology like remotes to switch on and off of lights,fan,Ac excetra.In
industries the machines do most of works,the workers have to just manage that machine.Due to with the lesier time increase and there skills are deteriorate because they do not have to use there
to use there ability do think as all the work is being done by machines.Aso,the students use there gadgets to play games all the day which is waste of time.But the technolgy provide more advantages and also have some disavantages.
Therefore, I disagree with the statement that more use of technology deteriote the thinking abilites.As techology has advantages and disadvantages both but,it is upto to us how we use the
techonlogy for increasing our ability or to deteriorate it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2347.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35844748858 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28001073533 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431506849315 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.0 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 23.0359550562 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.121736944 60.3974514979 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.777777778 118.986275619 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.6666666667 23.4991977007 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 5.21951772744 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.97078651685 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 46.0 7.80617977528 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373219795562 0.243740707755 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198477423022 0.0831039109588 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.207649898778 0.0758088955206 274% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139044635308 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186696747246 0.0667264976115 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.2 14.1392134831 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 48.8420337079 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 12.1743820225 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.7 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 11.2143820225 189% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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