Nowadays, many people choose readymade food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?
In the recent times, majority of Men and Women prefer parcel food other than home-made food. This essay mainly focuses on working women who is the main cook in everyone’s home. The following paragraph takes a look at both sides of this idea.
To embark on, the positive side of choosing the readymade foodavailable both at online and store. Instead of wasting time in preparing the required ingredients, it saves time as the food ordered will be delivered in few minutes than the time taken for cooking. Also there will be a wide variety of food which is of different kinds such as Italian, Continental, Chinese, South Indian and North Indian. Eating our special dish on a stressful day can help to get over our mood swings and enjoy the dish so the day can be spent well.
On the other hand, to go with the negative side of this choice. Everyone is aware of the truth, it is unhygienic. The added flavors in food, will result in health problems like acidity, food poison, fatigue, etc. On ordering the food online, the delivery person might also mess with the food, or change the parcel or in case of bringing the order late which cannot be served hot as compared to home prepared food.
To conclude with, parcel food serves as an advantage asit helps to save time effectively and the food can be ordered as per our taste buds whereas, on the negative side, it will also end up with alot harm to our health as it is unhygienic and some old or spoiled items may also be used for cooking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...inutes than the time taken for cooking. Also there will be a wide variety of food wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, well, whereas, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54243542435 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36966458577 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586715867159 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3298266414 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.583333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130519052339 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049504090619 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372785557118 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821423168704 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236066066278 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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