Design of buildings have positive and negative impact on people's life and work ?
At present the architecture has developed and we create our own innovative designs. Residents take more care in creating their own shelter with the facilities they need. This essay discusses how a well structured building is important people.
Though we take care of the basic needs, the building's envirnment whould make the residents to be relaxed and keep calm. This can be achieved if the house has proper ventilation and natual light that promotes good health to people. Spacious environment and a pleasent nature based construction encourages us to have a good time and mood with our loved ones back home.
On the other hand, a poor design creates a contradicting mood in one's life. For example, if the house is south-west facing, they face the sun during noon which causes more heat and spoils heath condition. It is essential for the owner to have a fruitful design for the well-being of the residents. Also No proper ventilating facility creates even more health issues.
To put it in a nut shell, the design of the building has a huge impact in the residents life that a good design is beneficial to both residents and owner. Bad construction may lead to negative thoughts and serious health problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95145631068 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71296256828 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4175531772 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159236877718 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535301501811 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653456347679 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986254903665 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770098204468 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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