Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries. According to you what solutions can be provided by the government and individuals
It has become quite common in the recent decade that people with different aspirations have started roaming all across the world especially to western counties which has wide exposure to various industries. I am going to discuss in detail on why the fear of strangers started raising prominently and how governments, diplomats can devise policies around these issues and people contribution defuse the issue.
People all around the world wish to lead a peaceful and healthy life which is one of the most clear reason for this act. When local realized about competition in jobs, day-to-day life challenges and strangers creating local societies, they became extremely annoyed resulting conservative nature which ignited most of the community unknowingly. For Example, more and more people getting settled in Europe, US have resulted in local community losing jobs and facing challenges for livelihood.
Local government has to device key policies and make the common citizen understand the positive impact on counties economy due to foreigners. A need for optimistic attitude among locals has to comeout which probably can happen when people start travelling counties, understand and get oneself educated on various cultures. This mindset change has to be incorporated with foreigners as well, who aspire to travel western countries for a better life.
To summarize, I strongly believe local governments and people has to understand that foreigners coming to western counties are immensely helping economy and overall standards of country which is obviously important in the twenty-first decade.
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- International travel and tourism makes people prejudiced rather than broad-minded. What are its causes and what measures can be taken to solve this problem? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'counties'' or 'county's'?
Suggestion: counties'; county's
...tizen understand the positive impact on counties economy due to foreigners. A need for o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54693877551 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80324082097 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624489795918 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.9985302506 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 104.977214359 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2222222222 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.061976183642 0.242375264174 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.02846758258 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245165172668 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0439809797004 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283997695183 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 12.6369458128 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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