Some people think that public health is a responsibility of the government, while others believe that individuals should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the current age, whether government should be responsible for public health or individuals should be responsible for their own health has sparked much debate. Some people assert that government should provide better facilities and infrastructure for healthcare. Personally, I agree that individuals should take care of themselves by their own.
It is very important for an individual to follow the daily routine in terms of eating, sleeping and exercise. Eating healthy food and on time helps in maintaining a good body. Fresh fruits, vegetables and fish contain large amounts of nutrients in them which helps naturally to maintain blood pressure, cholesterol and sugar levels in the body. Food plays a very vital role in regards to maintaining health safety of an individual.
In addition, sleeping on time and exercising are equally important for maintaining good health. A person who sleeps at least six to sever hours a day is considered healthy as it avoids a person to be lethargic during the day or having a headache. Similarly, exercise also avoids a person being lazy during the day. Exercising regularly helps in maintaining a good structure of the body and helps in maintaining the weight of an individual. For instance, individuals who follow the daily set routine of their life of eating healthy, sleeping on time and exercising regularly are more efficient and responsible towards their own health. As a result, individuals can easily be responsible enough towards their own health and safety.
On the other hand, government can be responsible for public health and safety in terms of providing better infrastructure, facilities, programs, more qualified doctors. This is only possible if government takes the responsibility by properly investing its tax income towards public health care. Consequently, responsibility of the government is quite limited.
In summary, I would concede that governments responsibility towards public health care has some advantages. Despite that, individuals personal health supports much better way. Overall, I am convinced that individuals should be responsible for their own health
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... the body. Food plays a very vital role in regards to maintaining health safety of an individ...
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Line 9, column 34, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...ed. In summary, I would concede that governments responsibility towards public health ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, similarly, so, at least, for instance, in addition, in summary, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48036253776 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08745661506 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498489425982 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0175044175 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4736842105 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4210526316 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398784009851 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141344572589 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132727421834 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261678477795 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14099778374 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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