These days Retail outlets are being replaced by large super-market or departmental stores in most places in the world. Some people really welcome such change whereas others argue that it is not a beneficial advancement to the community. I tend to believe that although these recent developments have made shopping quite comfortable and quicker, it has brought some negative consequence to the local vendors and people of lower income group.
Those who advocate that shopping malls are better than the road-side shops say that the concept of buying a variety of goods under the single roof has brought in several advantages to the customers. For example, it saves more time that we spend in shopping. Furthermore, transparent display and easy accessibility of goods at the malls enables customers to pick and check the quality as well as the content of the product that they are going to buy. However, I tend to believe that despite the few advantages the shopping malls can never replace the facility that the neighborhood sellers offer us.
To begin with, small shops in the local area offers a more personal connection to the customers when comparing to the huge multiplex stores. In addition to this, departmental stores are rather expensive than local shopping outlets. Moreover, small vendors those who these shops for their daily living gets largely impacted because of this negative trend. As they could able to afford huge investments to face the competitions from bigger players, they soon run out of occupation in the future.
In conclusion, in spite of offering a variety of benefits such as easy shopping, time-saving etc, the large shopping malls or supermarkets can never be the complete alternative to the consumers. In my opinion, there should be enough space for small vendors to set up their business and offer goods and services to regional customers. In order to have a balanced economy, the government shall find a mid-way to tackle this recent economic trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, really, so, well, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10736196319 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7140722243 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7314666184 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.928571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312035994191 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939446477551 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693515582393 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172778987211 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476946335185 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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