Essay topics: Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.
Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter,
A) Introduce yourself
B) Explain what the problem is
C) Suggest solutions
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with reference to your advertisement in The Times of India on 1st October regarding part-time voluntary work at your hospital.
I am deeply interested in joining your institution since it will give me not only contentment and personal satisfaction but also relevant experience. I intend to use this experience along with my one-year training in the emergency ward of the ivy hospital, Chandigarh, to secure employment in a reputed hospital in Mumbai.
Moreover, I understand the functioning of various intensive care equipments and know the emergency protocols. I will prefer to work in your hospital’s intensive care Unit so that I can use my experience at the ivy hospital to serve the patients.
Currently, I am pursuing a masters degree at the Dayanand Medical College and have classes from 8 am to 5 pm. Consequently, I can serve only during the night shift.
I will feel privileged if you provide me the opportunity to render my services.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 151, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...isfaction but also relevant experience. I intend to use this experience along wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, regarding, so, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40718562874 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19803087609 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646706586826 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8853534075 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111106607482 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457049197312 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487359207543 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552259780338 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476271294545 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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