Read and think about the following statement
"Childhood is the most important time of a person's life"
Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Be sure to explain your reasoning with specific details and examples.
Childhood is the happiest time of a person’s life. A child does not have any responsibilities, and is loved by everyone. It is also the most important time of a person’s life. I agree with the given statement because of the following reasons.
Firstly, guidance of a person in his childhood is important. If the child is guided correctly, then he can do wonders in his life. In the same way, if the child is guided in the wrong direction, then his future might be destroyed. For example, Robert Kiyosaki, an excellent investor and successful businessman, in his childhood, was taught about money by his mentor. At the age of 9, Robert Kiyosaki started his lessons about money taught by his rich dad (mentor). By receiving proper guidance in his childhood, he was able to excel in his adult life. On the other hand, children raised by terrorist groups tend to become terrorists themselves. This is because of wrong pedagogy.
Secondly, the childhood is the period of receiving. A child receives love and tenderness from his parents. Receiving these feelings helps him in becoming a benevolent adult. A person who can love others is loved by others. If the person does not receive these feelings in childhood, then the impact of these feelings will not be the same in the other period of life.
Another reason is the learning capacity of a child. Studies have shown that the learning capacity of a child is significantly more than that of an adult. Parents can use this as an advantage to boost their child’s intelligence.
All in all, childhood plays a major role in shaping one’s future. Hence childhood is the most important time of a person’s life
- Some believe that parents and their children should have fun during this time. While, some believe that they should talk about school work.Which of the following do you believe. State reasons and examples for you choice. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following sentence. "there is only one definition of success-to be able to spend your life in your own way". 61
- Read and think about the following statement Childhood is the most important time of a person s life Do you agree or disagree with this statement Be sure to explain your reasoning with specific details and examples 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Hence,
...ajor role in shaping one's future. Hence childhood is the most important time of...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...important time of a person's life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 286.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90559440559 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91324214637 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506993006993 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5591885393 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.7727272727 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182155019857 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644401430678 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750538764684 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116938351534 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905793367282 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.31 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.