All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
The statement contends that parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's school.Means it is necessary for
parents to give time to children's school or not.I suggest that it
is duty of parents to give volunteer time for school.It helps children's growth and for children academic.
The reason for agreement is that Children spends their half day ti me in school and school is necessary for their academics and for their growth also.They always learn New Things from school and and teachers.So I can say that parents should give enough time for their
children.
And Second point for agreement is when parents give time for school
means school special occasion or parents meeting actually they give
Moral support to children which actually required for growing child.
because of that they not to feel and type of embarrassment in front
of any people or classmates.Example is that High Educated parents
always attend schools meeting and got involved themselves.
The reason for disagreement is that parents are busy in their works
and they can't give volunteer time for their people.They have to handle their work along with children school. So Sometimes it is not
for parents.
In fact I find this statement is probably prove for children growth and give Important to their schools.Sometimes It is possible for parents not to give time but they should.
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'proved', 'proven'.
Suggestion: proved; proven
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, second, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 58.6224719101 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 226.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2389380531 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75057573053 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 215.323595506 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473451327434 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 704.065955056 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.3949055066 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.142857143 118.986275619 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2857142857 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.97078651685 262% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328576054311 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176927662626 0.0831039109588 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1280048762 0.0758088955206 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151311836146 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122095106364 0.0667264976115 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 14.1392134831 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 100.480337079 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.