In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Today’s world demands both parents to work in order to support their families as it is difficult for many of them to satisfy their family needs. Some people have of the opinion that both parents working means children are not getting enough care. However, in my opinion, we cannot generalize that the children of all working parents do not get proper support from their parents.
Those who are against both parents working may be of the view that children are not happy because their parents work. This is true when both husband and wife work for long hours and they do not get time to spend with their children. The work pressure or long commute from workplace to home are some of the reasons for this long working hours.In these cases children will not get love and attention they want from parents when they are young or are sick. The downside of single working parents is job insecurity and not having enough money to support the family needs.
On the other hand, there are many successful working parents who amazingly balance their work and family life and spend time with their children. These families will have more financial freedom and do not worry even if one person loses a job for a short time. They will enjoy the better facilities like good housing, money for medical expenses, children’s education, vacation travel and other family needs. These parents’ children will learn to be independent from young age.
So to summarize, both working parents is inevitable in today’s demanding world and some people may be against this. In my opinion both working parents will be an advantage if they have a work-life balance and know how to give time to their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88620689655 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38629908134 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479310344828 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1921071391 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42948551048 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189486441038 0.084324248473 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724303466345 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306611028837 0.151304729494 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466338243535 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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