Politicians should pursue common grounds and reasonable consensus rather than the elusive ideal
Politicians should pursue common grounds and reasonable consensus rather than the elusive ideal.I fully agree with this statement and should favor on the opinions which providesthe common grounds which benefits each citizen of the particular state or the country and their should be a mark on the reasonable consensus that agrees and unites every citizen .None of the programs provided by the politicians should hurt the sentiments of the people surrounding him/her.Going to the elusive ideals ,there are many elusive ideals that are in favor to the citizens but that might prove to be counterproductive.
Firstly I act towards gaining momentum to the common grounds where politicians such as abraham lincoln gave the statement “he was tired in abolishing the slavery in thte united states” these are the politicians who work for the people and give their full efforts and work on about the needs and efforts needed for a productive society.He tried to pursue on giving to the human rights and efforts for a fully democratic society.There are many other examples of the politicians across the globe who have gain an enormous amount of applause for their deeds .
For the reasonable’ consensus there should be agreement from the regions of the state and to all the public groups in the state or the particular country .A politician should move around the needs of people who believed them and fulfill all their needs .The development of the society should to a some level ,and working to gain that level politician should work on morals and immoral behind that work.Is their a necessity for development across state or the country ?
Or the only purpose of the politicians is of gaining the votes of the public.Yes their should be development across every part of the society but hurting some people and then gaining momentum is not a correct procedure.
Moving towards the elusive ideals,every society wants to be developed and want to rise their economy compared to various other countries in the world .But this development should be agreed by all the people.For example ,we take the case of the hitler who wanted to see germany for the colonial powers across the globe but he wanted to achieve this goals for his own benefits as such for his own power but not for the peace between the peoples in the germany and to the countries surrounding him.Yes i do agree that every society or the state or country should work on the path of development but these decision should not rely on the thinking of the politicians only but also should be agreeable to every group of people.
On the sum I want to convey that every politicians should work on common grounds and reasonable consensus rather than the elusive ideals.As the time proceeds, people get more diverse a time will come when they all agree for the development of the nation.Therefore politicians should focus on common grounds and reasonable consensus.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, so, then, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2447.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 489.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00408997955 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7468268002 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.421267893661 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 767.7 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 23.0359550562 352% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.77540961 60.3974514979 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 407.833333333 118.986275619 343% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.5 23.4991977007 347% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 5.21951772744 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 7.80617977528 461% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379223308065 0.243740707755 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233757169408 0.0831039109588 281% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.194406273322 0.0758088955206 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233757169408 0.150359130593 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.194406273322 0.0667264976115 291% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.9 14.1392134831 303% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.74 48.8420337079 -22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.9 12.1743820225 287% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.38706741573 126% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 11.2143820225 307% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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