Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social roblems,as well as practicle problems to what extend do you agree or with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences.
Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems,as well as practicle problems to what extend do you agree or with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences.
In today's fast-pacing life,emigration is an undeniable upward trend that enforces emigrants to speak in the language of hoste country; people who opt to live in other countries either for academic or occupation porpuses undertake a number of problems. I am of the opinion that this modification in individuals' life bring about sundry benefits.Analysing autonomous individuals and cultural understanding will illustrates this.
Firstly,living in a nation with completely different language is a problematic option, uncomprehensible verbal communication inevitably spark off issues ranging from difficulties in arrenging accommodation,shopping grocery, and seeking job,also communicating with native speakers will be challenging.For instance,my brother when initially has entered to germany ,as a job applicant, found it extremly intricate to purchase his requirements without being expert in germany language,therefore, he did his entire shops online for several months.for an individual, furthermore, who is not enough capable of speaking foreign language in a foreign country eventually would terminate breakdown due to strong feeling of cutting off from other members of society,Thus, it is obvious living abroad with distinct native language result in some unescapable drawbacks.
However,this change is known as a life-transmission because it would widen individuals' perspective to other cultures and communities,friend of mine has emigrated to turkey four years ago,she was an absolote prejudice person without any respect to turkish people; this unwanted journey diminished her bigotry and narrow-mindness fortunately.Besides,her dependant character has converted to autonomous disposition.Consequently,it is evident that spend your time out in country with disparate culture values and different spoken language would reduce racism and dichotomy among people around world.
To conclude,despite a majority demerits compound with living other country,were a person to live out of its boundry,it would result in public mutual understanding as well as nurturing independent members of nation.In my opinion advantages of this modification outweigh disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12138728324 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.89923705153 2.80592935109 139% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650289017341 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 253.997589576 49.4020404114 514% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 302.571428571 106.682146367 284% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.4285714286 20.7667163134 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5714285714 7.06120827912 277% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389067229491 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205170316078 0.084324248473 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.216679374935 0.0667982634062 324% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234122687705 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.221306893022 0.056905535591 389% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.1 13.0946893788 245% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.64 50.2224549098 -7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.1 12.4159519038 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.05 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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