Over the past decade, the explosion development of the internet has significantly revolutionized various aspects of our life. Nowadays, shop, work and communication online play a crucial role in modern society lead to the absence of face-to-face contacts. In my viewpoint, this argument has both beneficial and detrimental impacts on humankind.
In the first place, it would be totally and utterly comfy and handy to transfer, socialize via the internet. This means that people are able to buy food or carry out their business at any time if they had a personal computer or mobile phone which is accessed to the internet. As a result, customers are capable of gaining benefits from avoiding long lines and crowds in conventional business methods. Moreover, the way of communication has changed dramatically, people currently tend to use internet as an effective and reasonable path to keep in touch. For example, my family usually transfer information through Facebook or Viber when we are at long distances from each other
However, it goes without saying that face-to-face conversation attached great importance in daily life. In fact, direct contact helps people to feel a sense of true happiness and satisfaction. A couple of hilarious stories which are merely shared in reality make our life more beautiful and meaningful. For instances, my mother and her fellows catch up on gossip over a long period every day to tighten relationships and have mutual understandings.
In conclusion, although shopping, working and communication methods undergo a remarkable change due to the emergence of internet, face-to-face contacts have an undeniably essential position in modern society. From my perspective, people should apply both ways into their lives to gain the greatest benefits.
Over the past decade, the explosion development of the internet has significantly revolutionized various aspects of our life. Nowadays, shop, work and communication online play a crucial role in modern society lead to the absence of face-to-face contacts. In my viewpoint, this argument has both beneficial and detrimental impacts on humankind.
In the first place, it would be totally and utterly comfy and handy to transfer, socialize via the internet. This means that people are able to buy food or carry out their business at any time if they had a personal computer or mobile phone which is accessed to the internet. As a result, customers are capable of gaining benefits from avoiding long lines and crowds in conventional business methods. Moreover, the way of communication has changed dramatically, people currently tend to use internet as an effective and reasonable path to keep in touch. For example, my family usually transfer information through Facebook or Viber when we are at long distances from each other
However, it goes without saying that face-to-face conversation attached great importance in daily life. In fact, direct contact helps people to feel a sense of true happiness and satisfaction. A couple of hilarious stories which are merely shared in reality make our life more beautiful and meaningful. For instances, my mother and her fellows catch up on gossip over a long period every day to tighten relationships and have mutual understandings.
In conclusion, although shopping, working and communication methods undergo a remarkable change due to the emergence of internet, face-to-face contacts have an undeniably essential position in modern society. From my perspective, people should apply both ways into their lives to gain the greatest benefits.
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- Most people try to balance between their work and other parts of their lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. What are the reasons for this and what can be done to solve this? 73
- Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages. 56
- Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future Others by contrast are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than huma 90
- Fossil fuels such as coal oil and natural gas are used in many countries The use of alternative sources of energy including wind and solar power is encouraged Is this trend a positive or negative development 72
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that take part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my view, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0846889831 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1861190328 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.307692308 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383352246231 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123500460818 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202036266118 0.0667982634062 302% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268873774323 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.301523032143 0.056905535591 530% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.