Accomodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas . Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
In many large cities, the increase in housing demand and transportation is being a big problem and it need to be find solutions. There is an opinion that businesses should be relocated to the countryside. For me, this idea brings some certain benefits but it has more disadvantages than that.
It is easily seen that moving businesses to the rural areas has good effects on accommodation and transport. Firstly, moving the businesses reduces the burden on the traffic. Offices or workplaces at the suburban makes workers have to move outside the city which mean the number of people and vehicles join in the inner traffic is decrease. The second, to save time and effort spent on travel, workers tend to live in the countryside where near their workplace. This is clear that urban population will smaller, follows requires of accommodation come down.
Look at other hand, there is not less drawback of this idea. The first to mention, it impacts to the life of citizens. It will be longer distance for deliver product to customers if the business are moved out of city and it means that people have to consume more time for traveling or transport, and money too. In addition, the moving makes the links among the business, between business and consumers become harder. That is the reason why the businesses tend to be located in the city where nearer the centre to save a big amount of money for reaching customers and delivering productions, businesses can work more effective.
In conclusion, I believe that the drawbacks of this policy bring back outweigh their benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91760299625 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69319381672 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8388926746 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7857142857 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207105737458 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671179822751 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798237878255 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110136986315 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470709282691 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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