Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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Workers have an enormous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and in an intangible ways.
It is utterly important to appreciate the efforts of the successful jobs on the society. Although some people hold the view pint that in order to have a felicitous carrier, need good relations with people.However, others hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. In my perception which has led me to agree with the idea that, successful jobs needs a concrete base of knwoledge in order to pursue and have brilient future.In the following essay I shall delve into the most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, the excessive study during our school life will enhance our professionalism skill and this in turn, will increase our job outcome. My own experience is a good example of that, during my school study, the teacher keeps to anchorage us to study hard to get a decent job. Many did not take her advice seriously since in my countries, the relation plays a pivotal role in getting jobs. Indeed, this fact is have its side point but never affect the successful of the job. Later, those who depends on relation , lost their job later when their friends leave the company and who left? the most smart, educated, and professional people.
In addition, learning in school will definitly, helps to overcome drawbacks that we may face it during our carrier. Furthermore, it will inspirit us to become more creative. For instance, one of my friends study poltitcs. Although, many of her friends and family members did not agree for her major. She insist to pursue it . Nevertheless, she was one out of 48 students who are the most brillient and intelligent one. This helps her to get a good jobs in the government. Eventually, she continue her higher educatio during her works time. Later, she became the minister of the foriegen ministry and makes a special dicession to encourage womens to continue their higer education and become equal with the man. My country womens provide her with all dificulty they may face during their educations. Sh edonate from her own money to provide a certain organization to help them. Her succeed consider one of the most mythic stories of succes especially in a country that never enchourage womens education.
To sum up, after contemplating the reasons that I mentioned before, taking all the factors into consideration, I reinfoce my idea that learning is the most essential factor to enjoy and achieve our gfuture goals by having a good and successful job because of it increase our proficional skill and helps us understand and overcome the difficulty and increas iour creativity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2215.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95525727069 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75247942326 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548098434004 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0519102914 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2916666667 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158960906751 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407312296612 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395205891164 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806885154577 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607279834053 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.